The Increments

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The first time, it was nothing.

Scott Lassiter sat in the back booth of the Formosa Cafe on Santa Monica Boulevard, the red vinyl cracked beneath him, a half-empty glass of Jack Daniels sweating onto a cocktail napkin. Across the table, Eddie Carbone — producer, rainmaker, a man whose office had a view of the Hollywood sign and whose Rolodex contained numbers Scott would have traded a kidney for — was talking about a rewrite.

"Just a polish," Eddie said. "The script is ninety percent there. Need someone with your touch to take it the rest of the way."

"The rest of the way," Scott repeated, turning the phrase over like a coin.

"They've got a problem with the second act. Structural. You fix that, you're on the map."

Scott was thirty-four years old. He had been in Los Angeles for eight years, had written three spec scripts that had gotten him meetings and zero scripts that had gotten made, had worked as a script reader for Paramount, had ghost-written for a television producer whose name could not appear on the credits. He was not hungry — he was starving, the particular starvation of a man who had been told he was talented often enough to believe it but not often enough to eat from it.

He took the job.

The script was for a romantic comedy set in a ski lodge. It was terrible, but Scott fixed the second act. He was good at fixing things. Structure, pacing, dialogue — he could look at a broken script and see where the bones were misaligned the way a chiropractor could look at a spine and see where the vertebrae needed adjustment. He turned the rewrite in three weeks later, collected his check, and went back to his own work, feeling clean.

That was the first time.

The second time came six months later. Eddie called again. Different project this time — a thriller, a studio picture, a director attached who had made a film Scott had admired in film school.

"Same deal," Eddie said. "Polish. But there's a wrinkle."

The wrinkle was that the original writer was not to be told. The studio wanted fresh pages, but they did not want the original writer — a veteran with a Writers Guild arbitration credit — to know that someone else was touching his work. Scott would be paid off the books. Cash. A check from Eddie's production company, not from the studio.

"That's a guild violation," Scott said.

"It's how things get done," Eddie said. "You want to make movies, or you want to follow rules?"

Scott wanted to make movies. He had wanted to make movies since he was twelve years old in a multiplex in suburban Chicago, watching Raiders of the Lost Ark and understanding, with a clarity that felt religious, that this was what he wanted to do with his life. The rules, in the face of that wanting, seemed small and distant and abstract.

He took the job. He told himself it was just this once.

The rewritten pages were good. The film was made. Scott watched it in a theater on opening weekend, surrounded by people who laughed at his jokes and gasped at his reversals, and he felt something he had never felt before: the power of shaping what millions of people would see, even if his name was not anywhere in the credits.

That was the second time.

The third time was different. Eddie asked him to come to a meeting at a house in the Hollywood Hills — not a studio lot, not a production office, a private house with a long driveway and a gate that opened when Eddie punched a code into the keypad. Inside, the furniture was white, the view was of the entire basin, and the man sitting on the white sofa was a name Scott had seen on the front page of Variety more times than he could count.

"There's a situation," the man on the sofa said. He did not introduce himself. He did not need to.

The situation involved an actress. A young actress who had been cast in the man's new picture and who had, according to a series of increasingly panicked phone calls from her agent, become "difficult." She was making accusations. Nothing formal, nothing that had reached the trades, but potentially damaging if she decided to go public.

"I need you to talk to her," the man on the sofa said.

"I'm a writer," Scott said. "I don't do — "

"You're a fixer. Eddie says you're the best fixer he's ever worked with. And right now, what I need fixed is a conversation."

Scott looked at Eddie. Eddie looked back at him with the calm certainty of a man who had been doing this for twenty years and had never once been wrong about what someone would do.

"I don't know what to say to her," Scott said.

"Say whatever needs to be said," the man on the sofa replied. "You're a writer. You know how to make people believe things."

The actress lived in a bungalow in West Hollywood, a small place with bougainvillea climbing the front wall and a cat that watched Scott from the windowsill. Her name was Lacey. She was twenty-two years old. She made Scott coffee and sat across from him at a kitchen table that was too small for the weight of the conversation they were about to have.

"I'm not going to the police," she said, before Scott had even opened his mouth. "I know how that goes. But I'm not signing the release either."

"What do you want?" Scott asked.

She wanted what everyone wanted: for it not to have happened. For it not to be something she carried. For the man on the sofa to acknowledge, in some concrete way, that he had done what he had done. Not an apology — she did not believe in apologies from men like him — but an acknowledgment. A settlement, she called it. Fair compensation for the career she would not have because she had said no.

Scott listened. He listened well. It was one of the things he was good at.

Then he did what he had been sent to do. He did not threaten her. He was not cruel. He simply laid out the situation with the precision of a screenwriter plotting a third-act reversal. He talked about the legal costs, the publicity costs, the career costs. He talked about the way the industry protected its own. He talked about the other actresses who had tried the same thing — no names, just a general observation about how difficult it was to book roles after something like this. He talked about the release, and the number on the check that came with it, and the way that number could go up if she was reasonable.

He made it sound like advice. He made it sound like concern. He made it sound like he was on her side.

She signed the release. The number on the check went up. Scott drove back down the hill and told himself that he had done her a favor, that the alternative would have been worse, that he had protected her from a fight she could not win.

That was the third time.

The fourth time was about money. A director had gone over budget on a picture that was already underwater, and the studio was threatening to pull the plug, and Eddie needed Scott to look at the books — "just look at them" — and find a way to make the numbers work. Scott was not an accountant. He did not need to be. What he needed to be was creative, and creativity, he had learned, was a currency that could be spent in any transaction.

He found the way. It involved moving money between line items, classifying certain costs as development rather than production, creating a paper trail that would satisfy the studio's auditors and the completion bond company. It was not illegal — Scott had checked, had asked a lawyer friend in hypothetical terms, had made sure that the line he was walking was on the right side of the law. But it was not honest either. It was the kind of thing that would not hold up under close scrutiny, the kind of thing that depended on no one wanting to look too closely.

No one looked too closely. The picture was finished. The director kept his job. Eddie sent Scott a bonus — a check for fifty thousand dollars, more than Scott had made in any single year of his life before 1987.

He used the money to buy a house in the hills above Studio City. From his new deck, he could see the Warner Bros. water tower and the distant glint of the ocean. He stood there in the evenings with a glass of wine and told himself that he was still a writer, that the fixing was temporary, that he would get back to his own work once he had saved enough, once he had established himself, once the right project came along.

The fifth time, he did not tell himself anything.

It was a problem with a writer — an actual writer, a man with credits and an Oscar nomination and a stubborn insistence that his script not be changed. The studio wanted changes. Eddie wanted changes. The man on the sofa — Scott had learned his name by now, had learned everything about him, had been to his parties and his premieres and his private screenings — wanted changes.

"Make him understand," the man told Scott.

Scott understood what was being asked of him. He flew to New York, took the writer to dinner at the Four Seasons, and spent three hours explaining why the changes were necessary. He talked about test screenings and audience demographics, about the foreign market and the home video window, about the economics of an industry that was changing faster than anyone could track. He did not talk about the art. He had learned, by the fifth time, not to talk about the art.

The writer resisted. He was good at resisting — had been resisting for thirty years, had made a career out of resisting. But Scott was better at persuading. He had been practicing.

On the flight back to Los Angeles, sitting in first class with a glass of champagne he had not asked for, Scott tried to remember what it had felt like to be the one writing the scripts instead of the one rewriting them. He could not quite summon the feeling. It was like trying to remember a dream that had dissolved on waking — he knew the shape of it, the emotional residue, but the content was gone.

The sixth time was a girl.

Not a girl — a woman. Scott corrected himself, even in the privacy of his own thoughts. A woman named Diane who worked in the production office, who had come to Eddie with a story about a director and a trailer and a door that locked from the outside. She was not asking for money. She was asking for the director to be removed from the picture.

Scott met her in a coffee shop in Culver City, far from the studio lots and the production offices and the places where people might be watching. She was thirty-one years old, a production coordinator with good credits and a reputation for competence. She was not crying. She was not hysterical. She was angry, with the cold focused anger of someone who had been carrying this for months and had finally decided to do something about it.

"Eddie said you would help me," she said.

Scott looked at her across the formica tabletop, at her steady eyes and her set jaw, and he understood that this was a test. Not a test of his abilities — he had passed that test a long time ago. A test of his soul, of whatever remained of the person who had sat in a multiplex in suburban Chicago and believed that stories could save the world.

"Eddie sent me to resolve the situation," Scott said.

"And what does that mean?"

It meant, Scott knew, that he was supposed to make her go away. To offer her something — a better job on a different picture, a payout, a promise of future work — in exchange for her silence. It meant protecting the director, who was worth too much money to the picture, who was close to the man on the sofa, who had a reputation that needed to be preserved.

Scott opened his mouth to say the things he had said to Lacey, the practiced lines, the concerned tone, the careful framing that made a threat sound like advice.

And then he stopped.

He stopped because he could see, suddenly, the shape of his life from the outside. He could see the first time and the second time and the third time, the small compromises and the large ones, the justifications that had seemed reasonable in the moment and monstrous in the aggregate. He could see himself as a character in a script — the fixer, the smooth-talking middleman, the person who made problems disappear so that powerful men could keep being powerful. He had not set out to become this person. He had not made any single decision that he could point to and say, there, that was the moment I chose wrong. He had simply made a series of small choices, each one defensible, each one reasonable, each one a step down a staircase he had not realized he was descending.

"What do you want?" he asked Diane, and this time he meant it.

She wanted the director gone. She wanted to make movies without being afraid. She wanted to work in an industry that did not treat her body as a perk of the job.

Scott did not know if he could give her those things. He did not know if anyone could. But he knew, sitting in that coffee shop in Culver City, that he could not give Eddie what Eddie wanted. Not this time. Not the sixth time.

He went back to his house in the hills and sat on the deck and watched the sun go down behind the mountains. The Warner Bros. water tower was just visible in the fading light, a landmark from a different era of Hollywood, an era when the fixers were called studio executives and the compromises were called business decisions and no one pretended that the industry was anything other than what it was.

He called Eddie and said no.

"I'm not doing this anymore," Scott said.

There was a long pause on the other end of the line. Scott could hear Eddie breathing, could hear the ice clinking in whatever drink he was holding, could hear the distant sound of a party or a restaurant or whatever world Eddie inhabited when he was not on the phone.

"You're making a mistake," Eddie said.

"I've been making mistakes for two years," Scott said. "This is the first time I've stopped."

He hung up and sat in the dark for a long time. The city glittered below him, a carpet of lights stretching all the way to the ocean, and Scott thought about all the scripts he had not written, all the stories he had not told, all the small reasonable compromises that had accumulated into something unreasonable. He thought about Lacey, about the actress in the bungalow in West Hollywood, about the check she had taken and the career she had lost and the thing that had happened to her that would never be acknowledged. He thought about the writer in New York, the one who had resisted for thirty years, and he wondered if that was what it cost to stay clean in this town — a lifetime of resistance, a lifetime of saying no, a lifetime of making enemies and losing opportunities and watching other people take the jobs that should have been yours.

He did not know. He did not know anything, really, except that he was tired of being the person he had become, and that whatever came next — poverty, obscurity, the end of his career — was better than one more reasonable, defensible, well-justified compromise.

The phone rang. It was Diane. She wanted to thank him, wanted to know what he had told Eddie, wanted to know if the director would be removed.

"I don't know," Scott said. "I told Eddie I was done. That's all I know."

"I'll remember this," Diane said. "Whatever happens, I'll remember."

Scott did not know if that mattered. He did not know if being remembered was worth anything in a town that forgot everything. But he found, sitting in the dark with the city spread out below him, that he did not care whether it was worth anything. He had done something, finally, that his twelve-year-old self would have recognized as right. That was enough.

In the morning, he sat down at his typewriter — the IBM Selectric he had bought when he first moved to Los Angeles, the one that had never produced a script that got made — and began to write. Not a fix. Not a polish. A story. His story. The story of a man who had traded his soul piece by piece, in increments so small that he never noticed the weight of what he was giving away until it was almost too late.

He did not know if anyone would read it. He did not know if it was any good. He only knew that he was writing again, and that the words were coming, and that somewhere inside him the boy from the multiplex in suburban Chicago was sitting in the dark and waiting for the lights to come up.


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