The Metal Eaters
The factory closed on a Thursday. Mike Dolan was on the night shift, so he found out at 6:00 AM when the lights came on and his foreman, a guy named Ray who looked like he hadn't slept in a week, told him to go home and not come back.
"Permanent position elimination," Ray said. He wouldn't look Mike in the eye. "Sorry, man."
Mike drove his F-150 home and parked it in the driveway next to a pile of leaves he would never rake. The truck was a 2003 model, grey, with 187,000 miles on it. It had been his father's, and his father before that. It had carried steel all its life and now it would carry nothing.
Mike went inside. The house was small, two bedrooms, one bath, the kind of house that feels smaller when you're alone in it. He sat at the kitchen table and stared at the wall.
His phone was on the table. He didn't pick it up.
Three months later, the phone rang. It was Karen. His ex-wife. They had been divorced for eight months. Timmy was with her.
"Timmy wants to see you," Karen said. Her voice was flat. Not angry. Not friendly. The voice of someone who has had this conversation too many times.
"When?" Mike said.
"Saturday. If you want to."
"I want to."
"Okay. He's at my friend's house. You can pick him up at two."
Mike looked at his hands. They were thick and scarred, the hands of a man who had spent fifteen years lifting steel. He flexed his fingers and felt the faintest vibration, like a plucked string. He had been feeling it more often lately. When he touched metal--the steering wheel, the doorknob, the handle of his coffee mug--he felt something. A hum. A memory. He couldn't explain it. He told himself it was the arthritis starting. He was thirty-four. It was too early for arthritis, but then again, fifteen years in a steel mill is hard on the hands.
On Saturday, Mike drove to Karen's friend's house in a truck that barely started. He had twelve dollars in his pocket and half a tank of gas. The truck made a sound like a dying animal every time he accelerated.
Timmy was a small boy for thirteen. Thin, with Mike's nose and Karen's eyes. He stood on the sidewalk with his arms crossed and watched Mike pull up.
"Hey," Mike said when Timmy opened the door.
"Hey," Timmy said.
They sat in the truck for a minute. Mike didn't know what to say.
"You look different," Timmy said.
"I feel different," Mike said.
Timmy looked out the window. "Mom says you got a new job."
"I got a job. At a convenience store."
"Quick Stop?"
"Yeah."
Timmy nodded. "That's where my mom works."
They drove in silence. Mike's house was smaller than Karen's house. It was a rental, one bedroom, the kind of place you live when you are trying to disappear. Timmy looked around when they got there. He didn't say anything.
Mike went to the kitchen and made two glasses of milk. He put them on the table and sat down opposite his son.
From his pocket, he pulled a piece of metal. It was an alloy, maybe six inches long, rectangular, grey and dull. He had found it in a dumpster behind the factory three weeks ago. A worker at the Quick Stop--a guy named Dale who used to work the mill with Mike--had told him about it.
"It's special," Dale had said. "Last thing they made before they closed. They say it gives you feelings. Like, when you touch it, you can feel stuff."
Mike had laughed. Then he hadn't laughed.
He put the metal on the table between them.
"What's that?" Timmy asked.
"I don't know. I think it's some kind of alloy. From the factory."
Timmy reached out and touched it. His finger traced the edge.
"Do you believe in magic?" Mike asked.
Timmy looked at him like he was crazy. "No."
"I don't either. But sometimes when I touch this, I feel... something. Like a memory. But not my memory."
Timmy pulled his hand back. "That's weird."
"Yeah."
"Is it radioactive or something?"
"No. I don't think so. I mean, I don't know. I haven't had it tested."
Timmy looked at the metal, then at Mike, then back at the metal. "My dad used to work at the mill. He says most of the guys who lost their jobs just sit around now. Drinking. Watching TV. Doing nothing."
"I'm not doing nothing."
"Are you?"
Mike didn't have an answer for that.
Timmy picked up the metal again and held it for a few seconds. Then he put it down.
"It's cold," he said.
"It always feels cold," Mike said.
Timmy stood up. "Can we go outside?"
They went to the backyard. It was small, maybe twenty by thirty feet, fenced with a wooden fence that was rotting at the bottom. There was a swing set that Timmy had outgrown years ago. A patch of grass that was more weeds than grass.
Timmy stood in the middle of the yard and kicked at the ground.
"Dad?"
"Yeah?"
"Do you think we're ever gonna be okay again?"
Mike looked at his son. He looked at the rotting fence, the dead grass, the truck in the driveway with its flat tire. He looked at the sky, which was the color of steel wool.
"I think so," he said. And he meant it, even though he didn't know if it was true.
Timmy nodded. He didn't say anything else. They stood there for a while, father and son, in a backyard that was too small, under a sky that was too grey.
Inside the house, on the kitchen table, the piece of metal sat where Timmy had left it. Cold and grey and unremarkable.
Mike went back inside and picked it up. He held it in his palm and closed his eyes.
For a second, maybe two, he felt it. The hum. The vibration. A flash of something--not a memory, exactly, but a feeling. The feeling of a machine running. Of steel being shaped. Of a thousand men in hard hats working side by side, talking and laughing and sweating in the heat.
Then it was gone.
Mike opened his eyes. The metal was just metal. Cold and grey and heavy.
He put it in his pocket and went to make dinner. Spaghetti, from a can. Bread, from a loaf. Milk, from the half-gallon that was starting to sour.
It was not a lot. But it was enough. For tonight, it was enough.
After Timmy went home, Mike sat in his truck in the parking lot of the Quick Stop and watched the rain start. It was a thin rain, the kind that doesn't wash anything clean, just makes everything damp.
He took the metal out of his pocket and held it on the steering wheel.
Nothing happened.
Or maybe it did. Maybe the hum was there, faint and distant, like a radio station you can almost hear but not quite catch. Maybe it was just the truck's engine vibrating through the steering wheel. Maybe it was just arthritis.
Mike didn't know. He put the metal back in his pocket and started the truck. It made a sound like a dying animal, just like always.
He drove home through the rain, past the closed factory, past the empty lots where houses used to be, past the Quick Stop where Karen was probably stocking shelves right now, making seven twenty-five an hour.
He parked the truck, went inside, and sat at the kitchen table. He took the metal out of his pocket and set it on the table.
He sat there for a long time, looking at it.
Then he stood up, went to bed, and slept.
The metal sat on the table all night, cold and grey and silent.
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