I

The first time I saw a living Vietnamese person up close, he was kneeling in a rice paddy, pulling weeds with his hands. He couldn't have been older than twelve. He looked up when we stepped into the paddy, water rising to his waist, and he smiled. It was a small smile, the kind that says I know you're not here to hurt me because you haven't hurt me yet.

Sarge put his hand on my shoulder. "Don't shoot until I say."

I was holding my M16 like it was a religious object—tight, reverent, terrified that if I let go for a second it would bite me. The jungle was hot and wet and full of sounds I couldn't identify. Every rustle could be a VC. Every shadow could be a bullet.

The kid kept smiling. He said something in Vietnamese. Rahim, our interpreter, didn't translate. He just looked at me with those flat Korean-American eyes and said, "He's asking what we're doing in his field."

Sarge knelt down. He spoke Vietnamese—the broken kind that soldiers learn, the kind that says I am trying but I am not one of you—and he pointed at the field and made a gesture that meant we were looking for something.

The kid stood up, water dripping from his knees, and walked away. He didn't look back.

"He's telling his friends we're here," Rahim said. "Good. Let them tell the VC. We're leaving anyway."

"You're leaving?"

"We patrolled too far yesterday. Sarge got us turned around. Now we're walking back to base in the dark."

Sarge didn't correct him. He just stood up, splashed through the paddy, and started walking. I followed. The kid watched us go, still smiling, and I thought about how a twelve-year-old in a rice paddy understood things I didn't.

II

Terry wrote letters every day. He filled whole notebooks with descriptions of his life in Vietnam—how the food tasted (bad), how the weather felt (wet), how the girls looked (some of them, if you knew where to look). He wrote to a girl named Linda in Dayton, Ohio, and he wrote to his mother in Columbus, and he wrote to his brother in Akron, and I suspect he wrote to himself too, because some people need to hear their own voice to know they're still alive.

"You ever write home, Ray?" he asked one evening, sitting on a crate in the company area, pen in hand, sunlight filtering through the trees in thin golden lines.

"No."

"Why not?"

"Nothing to write about."

Terry laughed. "You just got shot at by a guy with a bamboo stick. That's something to write about."

"It was a trap. I stepped near it. Sarge said don't step on it. I didn't. End of story."

"That's your story?" Terry was writing while he talked, his pen moving across the paper in fast, confident strokes. "Ray Hatcher, nineteen years old, Kentucky, almost stepped on a bamboo trap in the jungle, walked away without telling anyone because he didn't think it was worth a letter. Linda's gonna love that."

"I don't have a Linda."

"Then write to your mother."

"I don't have much to say to my mother either."

Terry put down his pen and looked at me. He was young—nineteen, same as me—but he had a way of looking at people that made you feel like he'd already seen the version of you that you were becoming and he wasn't sure he liked it.

"You're just going to come back the same way you left?" Terry asked.

"I'm trying to come back at all."

He picked up his pen again. "That's sad, Ray. That's really sad."

He was right. It was sad. But it was also true, and in Vietnam, the things that were true were the things you kept to yourself.

III

The ambush came at 0400, before dawn, when the jungle was at its darkest and its sounds were at their most deceptive. I was on guard duty—standing by the perimeter fence, M16 across my chest, eyes scanning the tree line, thinking about breakfast and coffee and whether the mess hall would have eggs or just that grey porridge they called coffee substitute.

Then the jungle exploded.

NVA regulars—maybe a platoon, maybe a company—hit our perimeter with a mortar barrage followed by an AK-47 volley that sounded like a thousand pieces of wood breaking at once. The base lit up with muzzle flashes and tracer fire and the orange burst of mortars landing too close.

"Sarge!" I yelled. He was beside me before I knew he'd moved, dragging me behind the sandbag wall as bullets chewed through the sand and sprayed dirt into my face.

"Stay down!" he roared. Then he was up again, firing his M60 over the wall, the belt feeding through his hands with a mechanical rhythm that was almost beautiful if you weren't watching to see what the bullets were doing to the other side.

Terry was next to me. I could hear him breathing—heavy, fast, scared—and then a crack like thunder and he was gone. Not dramatic. Not slow. Just Terry, nineteen years old from Dayton, Ohio, sitting on a crate writing a letter to Linda, and then Terry, collapsed against the sandbags with a bullet through his throat, blood bubbling between his fingers as he tried to hold it in.

Sarge was moving before Terry hit the ground. He grabbed Terry's collar and dragged him backward through the firefight, bullets kicking up dirt around us, and I ran after him, my M16 banging against trees and rocks, my heart hammering like it wanted to escape my chest.

Sarge dropped Terry behind a tree and got on his knee and pressed his hands against Terry's throat. Blood poured through his fingers. Terry's eyes were open, wide and confused, like he couldn't understand how his body had betrayed him.

"Ray," Sarge said. His voice was calm. Almost gentle. "Get his ring and his wallet. You can take those."

I reached into Terry's pocket. My hands were shaking so badly I could barely feel the fabric. I found the wedding ring he'd bought Linda—a cheap silver band with a small stone that I knew was glass but Terry had told me it was real because it didn't matter what the stone was, only that he'd bought it.

I found the wallet. Inside was a photograph of Linda and a letter half-written: Dear Linda, today we patrolled near the river and I saw a kid in a rice paddy who smiled at me even though he should have been afraid of me. I think he understood something I don't. I think—

I put the ring and the wallet in my pocket and stood up. Sarge was still pressing his hands against Terry's throat, but Terry was gone. His eyes were open but they were looking at something I couldn't see.

Sarge looked up at me. His face was wet. I didn't know if it was rain or sweat or tears. In Vietnam, you couldn't always tell the difference.

"Let's go," he said. "We need to move."

We moved. I followed him into the dark, Terry's ring burning a hole in my pocket, and I didn't look back.

IV

The coal mine smelled the same as it had when I left. That was the first thing I noticed when I drove back to Appalachia—how everything smelled exactly as it had before, as if three years of war had happened in a different country entirely, in a world that existed parallel to this one, the world of hills and hollows and men who worked underground for twelve hours a day and came up with black lungs and white knuckles and nothing else.

Martha was married. I knew this before I saw her. I knew it because the postman's wife, a woman named Mrs. Gable who knew everything that happened in a twenty-mile radius, told me when I stopped at the general store to buy cigarettes.

"She married Jimmy Hale.煤矿工. Been married six months."

"Jimmy Hale?"

"The tall one. Works at the same mine your daddy works at."

I bought the cigarettes. I paid. I walked back to my truck. I drove home.

My father was in the kitchen, sitting at the table with a glass of whiskey in front of him and a newspaper he wasn't reading. He looked up when I entered. His face was the same—lined, pale from working underground, eyes that had seen too much coal and not enough sun.

"You came back," he said.

"I came back."

"Good. We need hands at the mine."

"I'm not sure I can—"

"You can. Everyone can. Sit down. Have some coffee before it gets cold."

I sat down. The coffee was bad. It was always bad. My mother had been dead five years, and my father had never learned to make anything that wasn't coal-related or alcohol-related, and the coffee was proof of that—burnt and watery and exactly what you'd expect from a man who had spent his life underground.

I drank it anyway.

V

It was midnight when I sat down at the kitchen table alone. My father was snoring in the other room—the deep, wet snore of a man who has exhausted himself physically and chemically and is now recharging for another day of the same.

I took Terry's ring out of my pocket and placed it on the table. I took Sarge's compass out of my jacket and placed it next to the ring. The compass was old and brass and the glass was cracked, but the needle still moved, still pointing north with the stubborn certainty of something that has no choice but to do what it was designed to do.

I looked at the ring. I looked at the compass. I thought about Terry, dead in a jungle he didn't understand, holding onto a ring he'd bought for a girl he'd never marry. I thought about Sarge, still out there somewhere—maybe in Kentucky, maybe in Poland, maybe dead, I didn't know and would probably never know.

I turned on the faucet. The water ran cold and clear and sounded nothing like artillery. I filled a glass, drank it, and set it down.

Then I picked up the compass and held it in front of my face. The needle trembled, found north, and held.

Sarge's voice, clear and calm, almost gentle: Keep it pointing north, kid.

I set the compass down. I turned off the light. I went to bed.

The mountains were quiet. The mine was quiet. The whole hollow was quiet, sleeping beneath a sky full of stars that hadn't changed since before anyone alive was born and would not change long after everyone alive is dead.

I lay in the dark and listened to my father cough and the wind move through the trees and the water running somewhere in the distance, a stream or a creek or the remains of a river that had been dammed and buried and forgotten, and I thought about Terry's letter—the half-written sentence about the kid in the rice paddy who smiled.

I thought about how we're all just kids in rice paddies, smiling at soldiers we should be afraid of, trying to understand something we don't have the words for yet.

I closed my eyes. I did not sleep. But I didn't drink either.

That was something.

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