The Second Draft

Ben Carter was thirty-six years old and had written two hundred and forty-seven screenplays that were not his.

He knew the number because he kept a spreadsheet. Not a proud spreadsheet--a defensive one, the kind you make when you need to convince yourself that you are not a failure but simply a person who has made a series of small, reasonable compromises that have accumulated into something that looks like failure from the outside.

The spreadsheet lived on a laptop he kept in a desk drawer beneath a pile of unpaid bills and half-empty coffee mugs and a framed photograph of him and Sarah at Columbia, both of them twenty-six and smiling like people who had not yet learned how the world works.

2019. November. Ben was sitting in a coffee shop in DUMBO, Brooklyn, staring at a laptop screen that displayed a Netflix outline he was writing for a producer he would never meet, about a family that lived in a house in Connecticut that was not their house and had memories that were not their memories, and Ben was writing it because the check cleared and the check cleared every month and the check was the only thing that had been consistent in his life for the last ten years.

His phone rang. It was his mother.

"Your father wants to talk to you," she said.

"Tell him I'm busy."

"He says he's not busy. He says he's been busy for three years. He says you never call."

"I call when I can."

"When you can. Right. Well, call him when you can't."

She hung up. Ben stared at the phone. Then he closed the laptop and walked out of the coffee shop and walked to the ferry and took it to Manhattan and called his father, who answered on the second ring and said, "Ben."

"Hey, Pa."

"I heard you got hit by a car."

"I heard you heard."

"Maria told me. She says you're alright. She says you're more than alright. She says you broke your wrist and your rib and your spirit."

Ben laughed. It was a good laugh, the kind his mother used to make when he was seven and he had painted the cat purple and tried to pass it off as an experimental breed. "She's dramatic."

"She's your mother. It's in the job description."

They talked for ten minutes. Frank Carter was a man of few words, which was not a choice--it was a habit formed over sixty years of working in factories and union halls and arguing with men who thought silence was weakness. Ben had learned to listen to what his father did not say, which was usually more important than what he did.

"I'll come visit," Ben said.

"You do that."

They hung up. Ben stood on the Manhattan ferry and watched Brooklyn get closer and thought about the spreadsheet and the two hundred and forty-seven screenplays and the fact that he had not written a word that was his in ten years.

The reunion had been in Queens. Ten years since Columbia, ten years since they had all graduated with their degrees and their dreams and their delusions about what they were going to do with their lives. Ben had not been to a reunion since. This one had been different because Sarah had organized it, and Sarah had always been the kind of person who organized things, the kind of person who made sure everyone had a seat at the table and a plate with food on it and a reason to stay.

She had not spoken to him in three years.

He had not spoken to her in three years.

They had not spoken to each other because three years was a long time to be angry at someone you had loved, and anger is a full-time job and Ben had enough full-time jobs. He had been angry at her for leaving. She had been angry at him for staying. They had both been right and both been wrong, and the three years had passed like a long Sunday, and now here they were, in a community center in Queens, drinking cheap wine and pretending they were not thirty-six and pretending they were not tired and pretending they had not spent the last decade doing things that did not matter.

Ben had drunk too much. Not wine--the craft beer Sarah had not known how to refuse, the kind his father would have called "rabbit food" because it was light and bubbly and had a name like "Hazy IPA." Ben had drunk four of them and then two more because the fourth one had tasted like something his mother used to make when he was twelve and she had tried Irish stew and had used too much pepper and not enough salt, and he had drunk them because the taste had taken him back to a kitchen in Canarsie that smelled of garlic and regret and the radio playing Frank Sinatra, and he had drunk them because he was thirty-six years old and he had written two hundred and forty-seven screenplays that were not his and he was tired.

He had walked out of the community center at eleven o'clock and he had walked to the bike rack and he had gotten on the bike that he had bought used from a guy on the street for eighty dollars and that he had not had fixed since March, and he had pedaled toward the ferry, and he had been going maybe ten miles an hour, and a yellow Uber had come around the corner too fast, and the driver had been looking at his phone, and Ben had been looking at the street, and the car had hit him, and he had flown through the air like a man in a movie, which was funny, because he had written a lot of movies, and he had not once imagined that he would be the one flying through the air.

He woke up in a hospital bed with a broken wrist and a broken rib and a concussion and a nurse telling him he had been unconscious for two weeks and a doctor telling him he was lucky to be alive and a therapist telling him he was lucky to be conscious, and Ben lying there thinking that luck was a word people used when they did not want to talk about the fact that the universe is random and indifferent and does not care whether you live or die or spend two weeks unconscious in a hospital in Manhattan.

The rehabilitation was slow. His wrist healed in six weeks. His rib healed in eight. His head--his head was still figuring things out.

He started writing during the third week. Not a screenplay. Not an outline for a Netflix show about a family in a house in Connecticut that was not their house. He started writing about himself.

He wrote about the kitchen in Canarsie. He wrote about his mother making Irish stew and using too much pepper. He wrote about his father listening to Frank Sinatra and working in factories and arguing with men who thought silence was weakness. He wrote about Sarah at Columbia, twenty-six and smiling like someone who had not yet learned how the world works. He wrote about the two hundred and forty-seven screenplays and the spreadsheet and the fact that he had not written a word that was his in ten years.

He wrote because the therapist told him to. She said writing could help him process the trauma. He said trauma was a big word for getting hit by a car. She said the trauma was not the car. The trauma was everything that led to the car.

She was right.

He wrote for three hours every morning, before the physical therapy, before the medication, before the world came back. He wrote about the coffee shop in DUMBO and the laptop and the Netflix outline and the producer he would never meet. He wrote about the reunion in Queens and the craft beer and the Uber and the bike and the air. He wrote about his father in Canarsie and his mother in the kitchen and Sarah in the community center, smiling like someone who had not yet learned how the world works.

He wrote for three weeks. Then he wrote for three months. Then he had a manuscript, and the manuscript was not a screenplay, and it was not an outline, and it was not two hundred and forty-eight things that were not his.

It was his.

He showed it to the therapist. She read it in silence and then she handed it back and said, "This is good."

"It's not good. It's true."

"That's better."

He showed it to Sarah. He did not plan to show it to her. He had the manuscript in a brown envelope, and he was going to mail it to a publisher he had found online, and he had put on his coat and he was going to the post office, and he had walked past the bookstore in DUMBO where Sarah worked, and he had gone in because the bell above the door rang and it sounded like the bell above the door in the bookstore in Cambridge where they had their first date, and she was behind the counter, and she looked up, and she saw the envelope, and she said, "What's that?"

And he said, "Nothing."

And she said, "You're a terrible liar, Ben."

And he said, "It's a manuscript."

And she took the envelope and she read the first page, and then she read the second page, and then she put the manuscript down and she looked at him and she said, "When did you write this?"

"Since the accident."

"Since the accident. That's three months."

"More than three months."

"Ben."

"What?"

"You wrote something that's yours."

He did not answer. He could not. Because the truth was that he had not written it since the accident. He had written it because of the accident. The accident had not given him a second chance. The accident had given him a mirror, and the mirror had shown him that he had spent ten years writing other people's stories because he was too afraid to write his own, and the car had not nearly killed him. The car had nearly saved him.

Sarah picked up the manuscript again. She read it in the bookstore, while Ben stood behind the counter and rang up customers and pretended he was not watching her watch his life on paper.

She came to him at closing time with the manuscript in her hands and tears in her eyes and said, "You finally wrote your own story."

"I wrote someone else's story. It's about a guy who spent ten years writing other people's stories. That's not me. That's... that's a character."

"Ben."

"It's a character."

"You're a terrible liar."

He smiled. It was the first time he had smiled in three months without feeling like he was pretending.

The book came out six months later. It was not a bestseller. It was not even a good seller. It sold three thousand copies in the first year, most of them to people who knew him or knew someone who knew him or had read it at the reading he gave at the bookstore in DUMBO where fifty-two people showed up and sat in folding chairs and listened to him read about a kitchen in Canarsie and a man who listened to Frank Sinatra and a woman who made Irish stew and used too much pepper and not enough salt.

He did not become a famous writer. He did not become a rich writer. He did not become anything except a man who had written a book that was his, and the book was not great, and it was not even good by most standards, but it was his, and that was the difference.

Sarah came to the reading. She stood in the back of the room with her arms crossed and her chin tilted the way it used to be at Columbia, like she was judging him and approving of him at the same time. Afterward, she came up to him and said, "You're not the main character in this story, Ben."

"I know."

"That's the point."

He looked at her. She looked at him. And for the first time in three years, neither of them looked away.

He was not the main character. He never had been. He had spent ten years writing other people's stories because he did not believe his own was worth telling. But he had told it. He had written it. He had put it on paper, and it was not great, and it was not even good, but it was his, and that was enough.

He sat in the bookstore after everyone had left, with Sarah sitting across from him, reading the book he had written, and he thought about the second draft. Every screenplay he had written had gone through multiple drafts. The first draft was always terrible. The second draft was always better. The third draft was usually good enough to send to a producer who would never call you back.

Life was the same. The first draft was the life you were given. The second draft was the life you made. And the second draft was never going to be perfect, but it was going to be yours.

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