I.

The bullet hit me at 11:47 PM on a Tuesday. I knew this because I could see the bullet. Not after—it was already inside me, burning through my ribs, tearing through something that made me gasp and stagger against the brick wall of a dead-end alley off Flower Street. But before. I saw it leaving the gun three seconds before the trigger was pulled. I saw the man's finger tighten. I saw the flash.

Then the world went sideways.

When I woke up, I was lying in a puddle of rainwater and something that might have been blood—mine, probably, though I couldn't find the hole. The rain had stopped mid-fall. Droplets hung in the air like diamonds strung on invisible wire. I blinked, and they fell.

I had a headache the size of Los Angeles. And inside my skull, something else was waking up.

II.

I'm Jack Morretti. Thirty-eight years old. Twenty-two months in the Pacific. Came home with a medal I don't wear and a hand that shakes when it's cold. Became a private eye because the alternative was drinking myself into an early grave, and frankly, the drinking was already doing that job.

The thing inside me called itself the Watchmaker. It didn't give me a last name. Didn't need one. It lived in the back of my skull like a tenant who stopped paying rent and started rearranging furniture.

The ability manifested as fragments. I'd be walking down the street and suddenly I'd see a woman crying in a third-floor apartment on Hill Street—I hadn't been there, didn't know her, but there she was, sobbing into a handkerchief, three days in the future. Or I'd see my own body lying in a rain-soaked alley—this alley, actually—and I'd know I was going to die here. Sometime. Maybe three months from now.

I started investigating the missing women. Seven of them in two months. All from the poorer parts of the city. All without families who'd file reports. The LAPD didn't care. Nobody cared.

But the Watchmaker cared. He'd seen them. In his fragments, in his time-scattered memory, he'd seen what happened to them. They were still alive. For now. Locked in a basement somewhere, breathing, waiting.

I found the clue in a watch shop on Olvera Street. An antique chronometer, 1890s Swiss, ticking backward. The owner wouldn't look me in the eye when I asked about it. "Not for sale," he said. "Not ever."

But he told me too much. He told me about a project. A government project. Classified. Started in 1945 at some base up north. They were building a weapon. A clock that could stop time.

The Watchmaker went very quiet inside me. That meant he recognized it.

III.

Captain Russo found me before I found the basement.

Russo was a detective captain with a fat belly and a thinner conscience. He controlled half the vice in this city—gambling, prostitution, the kind of smuggling that moves people instead of product. He wore expensive suits and cheap boots and had a smile that never reached his eyes.

He found me sitting in my office, staring at a map of the city with seven red pins marking the last known locations of the missing women. He didn't knock. He never knocked.

"Morretti," he said, dropping into the chair opposite my desk. "You're poking at things that will poke back. Hard."

"I'm doing my job, Captain."

"Are you? Or is someone else doing it through you?" Russo leaned forward. His eyes were dark, flat, like coins at the bottom of a well. "You've been different since that shooting. Quicker. Sharper. Like you're not operating on regular time anymore."

I said nothing.

"I know about the project, Morretti. I've known for two years. My employers fund it. And now I know you've got one of their products inside your head."

The Watchmaker stirred. "He's lying," it whispered. Or maybe it wasn't whispering. Maybe it was just thinking out loud, and I was the one who heard.

Russo smiled. "You can hear him, can't you? The little voice. The Watchmaker. CIA's greatest—and greatest failure."

IV.

The truth was worse than anything I'd imagined.

The Watchmaker wasn't a victim. He was the first subject of the Chronos Project. They gave him an experimental compound—something derived from radioactive isotopes and something else, something they wouldn't name—and they locked him in a room with a clock that ticked backward. He didn't gain the ability to control time. He gained the ability to see it. All of it. Past, present, future, happening at once.

It drove him partially mad. Then fully mad. And in his madness, he killed everyone in the facility. Twelve people. Scientists, guards, a janitor who was just trying to do his job.

Then he ran. Into the time-stream. Drifting. Looking for a body to anchor to. A vessel.

He found me in that alley, bleeding out, a good twenty-eight years old with a lifetime of regret already written across my face. I was perfect. A broken man, easy to bend, easy to overwrite.

Russo's employers wanted him. The FBI wanted him. The mob wanted him. And I was the prize.

I stood in the rain outside the basement where the women were held. Russo's men were on one side. FBI agents on the other. The Watchmaker was inside me, growing louder, growing desperate. "Let me out," it said. "Let me finish this. Let me kill them all."

I looked at the gun in my hand. Seven bullets. Seven missing women. Seven seconds of time I could steal from the universe to make it right.

I made a different choice.

I turned the gun on myself.

The rain slowed. The bullets from Russo's men hung in the air like raindrops. I pulled the trigger. Time stopped.

And in that stopped time, I saw everything. Every version of this moment. Every choice. Every outcome. And in every single one, I died.

But the women lived.

That was the only outcome that mattered.

The rain resumed. The gun clattered to the wet pavement. And Jack Morretti walked away into the Los Angeles night, alive but hollowed out, carrying a dead man's memories and seven women's gratitude, neither of which felt like enough.

Some nights, when the rain hits the window just right, I still see the bullets hanging in the air. I wonder if I made the right choice.

Then I pour a drink, and the question dissolves like sugar in whiskey.

You don't get answers in this city. You just get longer nights.

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