Ashes in the Rustbelt

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ACT I: THE LIGHT (Rising Action)

Tommy Briggs sat in his apartment on Euclid Avenue and drank cheap beer from a chipped mug and watched the television show static that looked like snow if snow had opinions and was currently having a very bad day.

The apartment was cold because the heat had been off for three weeks and Tommy hadn't reported it because reporting it meant filling out forms and forms meant talking to people and talking to people meant pretending he cared about something other than getting through the next hour.

Through the window, he could see the water tower at the end of the block. It was an old thing, Babel-style, with riveted steel plates and a conical top that had once been painted white but was now the colour of dried blood. It had been abandoned for twenty years at least. The neighborhood had been dying for thirty.

But tonight it was glowing.

Not brightly. Just a faint pulse, like a heartbeat seen through skin. Blue-white, then dark, then blue-white again. Steady. Patient.

Tommy watched it for a while. Then he finished his beer and went to sleep.

That was the thing about living in the rustbelt: you saw strange things and you got used to them. When the factory closed, strange. When the next factory closed, also strange. When the streetlights stopped working and the alleys filled with broken glass and the dogs got big enough to be wolves--strange. When the water tower glowed like a dying star at the end of the block, Tommy's response was to close the window and pull the blanket up to his chin and try to sleep.

But sleep didn't come easily when the walls were humming.

ACT II: THE DISAPPEARANCES (Dark Currents)

The first person to disappear was the mailman. His name was Dennis and he was fifty-six and he had a bad hip and he delivered mail to Euclid Avenue every day for fourteen years and nobody on the block could understand why he vanished. One day he was there, shuffling up the sidewalk with his bag slung over his bad shoulder. The next day he wasn't. His supervisor said he'd quit. Nobody believed him. Nobody didn't believe him either. It was Cleveland. Nobody believed anything anymore.

Sully heard him go.

Sully lived on the first floor of Tommy's building, in the apartment with the broken window that was always open even in winter because Sully said closed rooms trapped the voices. Sully was sixty-two, a Vietnam veteran with a trembling hand and a thousand-yard stare that had nothing to do with distance and everything to do with time. He had been carrying the same look since 1969 and it hadn't gotten any lighter.

"I heard him," Sully told Tommy one evening when Tommy came down to the hallway to get something he couldn't remember. "Dennis. I heard him in the walls. He's in the tower now. Or the tower is in him. I can't tell the difference anymore."

Tommy had nodded and gone back upstairs and locked his door and stood there in the dark for a while, listening to the walls hum.

Lena moved in the same week. She was a single mother who worked the register at the Stop-N-Go on Superior Avenue and came home every night with the kind of exhaustion that sleep didn't touch. Her daughter Sophie was nine and quiet in the way that children are quiet when they are observing something the adults can't see.

Which, it turned out, was literally true.

Tommy saw it happen. He was in the hallway, carrying his laundry basket down to the machine room, when he saw Sophie standing at the end of the corridor and the floor lamps flickering. Not turning on and off. Floating. Three of them, lifting off their stands and hovering at eye level, glowing softly like fireflies.

Lena must have seen it too, because she appeared at the apartment door behind Tommy and went very still. Then, very quickly: "Sophie. Inside. Now."

The lamps fell. Sophie looked at her mother with large, frightened eyes and went inside. Lena closed the door and locked it and leaned against it and breathed for a long time.

Tommy put his laundry basket down and went back upstairs. He didn't knock. He didn't say anything. He just went upstairs and locked his door and listened to the walls hum and thought about how none of this was any of his business and how he was going to continue treating it that way.

Carlos knew. Of course Carlos knew. Carlos knew everything and said nothing about any of it, which in Carlos's case was the same as saying everything about nothing.

Carlos ran the auto repair shop on the corner, a place that existed more as a concept than a business, where he fixed whatever cars people brought him for whatever money they could pay him, which was usually nothing. He was fifty-five, Mexican-American, with hands that looked like they had been carved from leather and scar tissue.

"You should leave," he told Tommy one evening, not looking up from the engine block he was working on under the flickering fluorescent light of the shop.

"Leave where?" Tommy said. "There's nowhere to leave to."

"That's not what I mean." Carlos wiped his hands on a rag and looked at Tommy for the first time. His eyes were dark and tired and very clear. "The tower, it's waking up. Things are going to happen. Things you can't stop. You should go."

"Go where?"

"Anywhere. Akron. Cleveland proper. Even Chicago is further away than this." Carlos went back to the engine. "But you won't go."

"No," Tommy said. "I won't."

Because he was right. Tommy wasn't going anywhere. He had spent thirty-four years moving from one dead end to another, and the water tower glowing at the end of the block was, honestly, more interesting than most of what had come before.

ACT III: THE EXPLOSION (Climax)

The tower didn't explode the way explosions are described in movies. There was no fireball, no dramatic roar, no shockwave that shattered windows for blocks.

It exploded the way a human body explodes when it's been holding together by willpower and habit for too long and then the willpower gives out. It just came apart. Slowly, then all at once.

Tommy was inside when it started. He knew because the humming stopped. Not faded. Stopped. Like someone had pulled a plug. And in the silence that followed, he could hear Sully's voice, clear as a bell, coming from somewhere in the walls:

I heard you. I finally heard you.

Then the floor shook. Not violently. Just enough to make Tommy's beer mug fall off the table and shatter on the ground, which was appropriate because it was his last good mug.

He went to the door and opened it and saw Carlos running toward him from the shop, his face not afraid but determined, the way a man's face looks when he has made a decision and is executing it without hesitation or regret.

Carlos grabbed Tommy's arm and pushed him. Not gently. Hard enough that Tommy stumbled backward into the building and hit the wall.

"Go," Carlos said. And then, quieter: "You're worth more than them."

The tower collapsed. Not fell. Collapsed. Like a lung deflating. Dust and steel and something that was not quite dust and not quite steel filled the air. Tommy coughed and blinked and saw Carlos standing in the cloud of debris, silhouetted against a light that was not fire and not electricity and not anything Tommy had a name for.

Then the light consumed Carlos and the light consumed the tower and Tommy blinked and it was over.

Sully's body was found three days later, inside the ruins of the tower, curled on the ground like a man sleeping, his hand outstretched toward something that glowed faintly in his palm. A piece of the tower, maybe. Or something the tower had been guarding. Nobody took it from him.

Lena was gone by morning. No note. No forwarding address. Just an empty apartment and a single children's drawing taped to the refrigerator, drawn in crayon, showing three stick figures under a glowing tower, with the word FAMILY written in letters so careful they looked terrified.

The repair shop closed. Nobody knew where Carlos had come from, exactly. Nobody had ever asked.

ACT IV: THE HUMMING (Aftermath)

Tommy went back to his apartment. He picked up the broken pieces of his mug and threw them away. He opened a new beer from the six-pack in his fridge and sat down in the same chair and drank it in the same silence and watched the same water damage on the ceiling that now looked less like a map and more like a face.

The tower was gone. In its place was a pile of rubble that the city would probably clear out in a week, the way the city cleared out everything that got in the way of doing nothing in particular.

The hum was gone too. For three days, it was gone. Tommy almost missed it. Almost.

On the fourth night, he was lying in bed, staring at the ceiling, when he heard it again. Faint. Distant. Coming from somewhere in the walls. Not the tower. The walls of his building. The walls of his apartment.

He lay there for a long time, listening. The hum was different now. Softer. Slower. Like a heartbeat that had survived something and was still beating, not out of hope but out of habit.

Tommy pulled the blanket up to his chin and closed his eyes and listened to the walls hum and thought about Carlos and Sully and Lena and Sophie and Dennis the mailman and all the other people who had disappeared into whatever the tower had been and was now.

Then he turned over, went to sleep, and dreamed of a tower that was not a tower but a question that the world had been asking for ten thousand years and would keep asking until the world ran out of time to ask it.

He woke up the next morning, went to work at the warehouse, came home, drank a beer, and listened to the walls.

That's what you do in the rustbelt. You keep going. Not because it means anything. Because it's what you do.

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