Old Iron
I
The fish were getting harder to find. Lester Duval knew this. Nobody in the neighborhood knew it better than he did, because he was the one who had to go out on the river every morning and come back with less and less each time.
He was a mechanic, technically. But his skills were average, the kind of man who could fix a boat engine if you had the right parts and enough time, and who spent most of his days repairing old refrigerators and lawnmowers in a tin shack beside the Mississippi.
The river had always been good to people in this neighborhood. It gave you fish, and the fish gave you money, and the money kept you alive. But the fish were leaving, moving upstream or downstream or just deeper, wherever fish go when the water stops making sense.
One day at the junkyard, Lester found a generator from an old Ford truck. The casing was rusted through, but the copper wire inside was still good. He also found a broken microwave from a house that had been foreclosed, a few spools of copper wire, a secondhand temperature sensor, and a light switch from a Christmas tree.
He took everything home and built something. He wired the generator to the sensor, connected the switch to the motor, and rigged the whole thing to a metal frame he welded together from scrap. It was ugly, unreliable, and held together with duct tape and hope.
He named it Old Iron.
Old Iron did catch fish. Not many, but enough. Lester sold them at the market down by the French Quarter and had enough left over for a bottle of whiskey and a plate of gumbo.
II
The sensor was secondhand and it misread. Old Iron started grabbing things that were not fish. A duck. A plastic bag caught in the current. A piece of driftwood. Lester would pull these things out of the machine's mechanical claw and throw them back, muttering curses in a accent he had picked up from his grandfather.
He tried adjusting the sensor's sensitivity, but Old Iron's circuitry was hand-soldered, and he had no calibration tools. He could only guess, turning a small screw with a butter knife and watching the machine's behavior change.
Sometimes it would catch a good fish. Sometimes it would pull a shoe out of the river and slam it against the bank like it was something valuable.
Lester's daughter Mia liked to watch Old Iron work. She was seven, with braids and a gap between her front teeth and a laugh that sounded like water running over stones. She would stand on the bank and clap when the machine caught something, any thing.
"Look, Papa! Look what Old Iron got!"
Lester told her not to stand so close. She did not listen. Children rarely do.
III
The morning it happened, Lester woke to find Old Iron running. But it was not fishing. Its mechanical arm was extended toward the bank, reaching.
Mia was standing by the river, one step away from Old Iron's claw.
Lester ran. He was fifty-two and his knees were shot and the bank was muddy and he slipped and fell and got up and ran again.
But he was too late. Old Iron's claw closed around Mia's ankle and pulled her toward the water.
Lester grabbed the machine's housing and tried to pull it off her. The motor whined, a sound like something dying. The claw opened and closed and opened again, each time pulling Mia closer to the edge.
Lester held on with both hands, his feet slipping on the wet mud, his face pressed against the hot metal of the machine. He could feel Mia's weight shifting, her small hand reaching for him, her mouth open but no sound coming out because the river was too loud and the machine was too strong.
He finally killed Old Iron. He took a wrench from his pocket and smashed the motor housing until the wires sparked and the machine went still.
But the temperature in his arms was already gone.
IV
Lester did not call the police. Who would believe a fishing machine killed a child? They would call him crazy. They would call him a murderer. Maybe he was.
He just sat by the river and drank a whole bottle of whiskey and watched the water move. It was the same color it had always been, brown and slow and indifferent.
Old Iron's wreckage lay on the bank like a carcass.
After that, people said Lester sat by the river every day. He did not drink. He did not speak. He just watched the water.
Sometimes he would talk to Old Iron's wreckage. But no one could hear what he said.
The Mississippi kept flowing. It always would. It did not care about Lester Duval, or Mia, or Old Iron, or the seven-year-old girl who had stood too close to a machine that was never meant to be alive.
The river took everything eventually. It had all the time in the world.
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