The Hollow After

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I

Los Angeles, 1947. The rain was falling in sheets, the kind of rain that made the city look like a black-and-white movie. Jack Morrow sat in his apartment on the edge of Hollywood, watching it streak the window, a .38 revolver in his coat pocket and a name on a piece of paper in his hand.

Frank. Frank whatever. Worked at a garage. That was all he had. Five years of searching had given him less than a name.

Maggie was in the next room, trying on a coat that hid the scar on her face. She had been beautiful before the acid. Twenty-nine and radiant, with dark hair and green eyes and a laugh that filled a room. Now she was twenty-nine and radiant and scarred, and she tried not to look in mirrors.

The man who had done it was never caught. Not the drunk who threw the acid—drunk men were everywhere in 1942 Los Angeles. The man who had paid him. The man who had wanted Maggie out of the way because she had seen something she shouldn't have. Or maybe the man who just couldn't handle rejection. Jack had never found out.

He had spent five years looking for the drunk. He had drunk five years trying to forget that he couldn't find him.

II

Jack was twenty-eight and a WWII veteran. He had served in the Pacific and come back with shell shock and a pistol and a name. Frank. He had been hunting Frank for five years, tracking him through bars and street corners and police stations.

Tonight he was going to find him. He had a lead: a garage on Sunset Boulevard that employed a man named Frank who matched the description. Jack was going to go there, find Frank, and make him talk. Make him tell Jack who paid him. Make him give Jack the name of the man who had destroyed Maggie's face.

He put on his coat. He checked the revolver. He walked out into the rain.

The garage on Sunset Boulevard was closed, but Jack found the man who ran it. Frank was not there. He had left Texas two years ago. Gone to Phoenix. Or maybe Tucson. The garage owner wasn't sure.

Jack spent three more weeks searching Phoenix and Tucson. He found Frank in a small apartment in Phoenix. Frank was not the man Jack remembered. The Frank who had thrown the acid was dead. This Frank was a different man, older and thinner and afraid.

"I didn't do it," this Frank said. "I didn't throw any acid. I was drunk that night. I was at a bar in LA. I didn't do anything to anyone."

Jack stared at him. "But you—you were the one who—"

"Who what? I was drinking. So what? Everybody was drinking. I didn't throw acid at anyone. I didn't know anyone named Maggie."

Jack's world cracked. The revenge he had been building toward for five years had no target. The face in his memory—the one he had been using to focus his rage—was not the face of a real man. It was a fabrication. A story he had told himself.

III

Jack returned to Los Angeles drunk. He drank for a month. He drank because the pain was still there, the anger was still there, but the narrative that sustained it had collapsed. He had no target. No purpose. Just a sister with a scarred face and a brother who had lost his reason for living.

Maggie tried to help. She brought him to a VA hospital. He resisted. He didn't want to be fixed. He wanted the pain because the pain was the only thing that connected him to her. Without the revenge, without the hunt, what was he? Just a broken man in a broken city.

He got out of the hospital. Maggie packed her bags. She left him a note: "I love you, but I can't watch you destroy yourself anymore."

Jack sat in his empty apartment and stared at the wall. The rain had stopped. The .38 was on the table. He picked it up, looked at it, and set it down. Not because he'd found hope. Because he was too tired for either option.

The "devouring" he had felt—that compulsion to consume everything around him—was not supernatural. It was alcohol, PTSD, and grief manifesting as a physical sensation. It was the hunger of a man who had nothing left to eat but his own pain.

IV

Jack sat in the dark apartment, staring at a single raindrop on the window. He was not sure what happened tomorrow. He didn't care. He had been devouring his life for five years, and now there was nothing left to consume.

He picked up the .38 one more time. Looked at it. Put it in his pocket. Not to use it. Just to carry it. Because it was something. And something was better than nothing.

He walked out into the morning. The city was gray and quiet and full of people who were trying to get through another day. Jack was one of them. That was all.

Just another man trying to get through.

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