The Watching

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ACT I - THE FOUNDATION

I don't believe in ghosts. I've seen men bleed out in mud on islands that don't appear on most maps, and I can tell you that the afterlife, if it exists, doesn't walk through walls. It walks through you.

So when I measured the foundation of the building on Temple Street and found it extended thirty feet beyond the property line on three sides, I didn't think alien. I thought builder. I thought maybe a previous owner who wanted a cellar the size of a ballroom, or maybe a city contractor who cut corners and poured the concrete deeper than the blueprints showed.

The numbers don't lie. I learned that in the Navy, and I learned it in private investigation, and I learned it every day living with a wife who still occasionally looks at her reflection and doesn't immediately recognize the woman staring back.

Evelyn called it Temple Street, but the signs had fallen off decades ago and the address plates were painted over. The building was a seven-story box of red brick that looked like it had been designed by someone who'd never seen a building but had heard descriptions of one in a dim bar. The windows were too small. The doors too thick. And the foundation--the foundation was the size of an aircraft hangar.

I told Evelyn nothing. She had enough on her mind between the scripts they kept rewriting her into and the bottles she kept hidden in the bathroom cabinet.

The caretaker was the first thing that made me set my notebook aside and pick up the Colt.

His name was Crowe, though nobody called him that. He called himself Mr. Crowe. He was a thin man with a face like a dried apple, and he moved through the building like smoke. I noticed him because I noticed everything. In the service, you survive by noticing the corporal who's checking his ammunition and the one who isn't.

Mr. Crowe never checked anything. He never cleaned his rifles, because he didn't have any. He never walked the halls at night, because he didn't walk at all. He stood. In doorways. In corners. In the space between the stairwell and the kitchen on the ground floor, where he stood for hours, perfectly still, facing the wall.

I watched him for three days. Three days of standing. Three days of not blinking. On the third night, I took my binoculars--the good ones, the Zeiss I brought back from the Pacific--and I watched him watch the wall.

And I saw the eye.

It was on the back of his head, below the first pair, and it was white and unblinking and it turned slowly, like a turret, sweeping the corridor from left to right in a pattern that was too regular to be human.

A surveillance camera doesn't rotate that smoothly. A man doesn't have a third eye.

ACT II - THE INVESTIGATION

Delgado was a cop I'd served with, not in the same unit but in the same vicinity of a city that seemed to get smaller every year. He was a patrolman now, assigned to the Temple Street beat, and he was the kind of guy who knew every doorway and every back alley within a three-block radius.

I found him at a diner on Figueroa, eating pie he wasn't hungry for and nursing a coffee that had gone cold an hour ago.

'Vincent,' he said, when he saw me. 'You look like you haven't slept in a week.'

'I haven't.'

'Then eat some pie and tell me what's wrong.'

I told him about the building. About the foundation measurements. About Mr. Crowe and the way he stood in doorways and the way his head moved when he thought nobody was watching.

Delgado put down his fork. His hand was shaking, slightly, the way veterans' hands shake when they've held a weapon too long and too often.

'You saw him too,' he said.

'You saw him?'

'I've been on this beat for eight years. I know every man on it. Crowe's been at that building for thirty years. Thirty years, Vincent. Same man. Same clothes. Same nothing.'

'What do you mean, same nothing?'

'I mean his car hasn't moved. I mean the mail in his mailbox is never collected. I mean I've pulled him over three times for suspicious behavior and three times he's stood exactly where I left him, looking at the wall, and when I asked him his name he said, with complete flatness, 'Mr. Crowe.''

'And the eye?'

Delgado looked at me for a long time. Then he looked away, at the waitress refilling coffee cups, at a couple arguing in the corner booth, at the neon sign blinking outside the window.

'Last Tuesday,' he said quietly, 'I was walking past the building. It was raining. I looked through the lobby window, and I saw Crowe standing in the hallway. And I saw, from the angle of the street, the back of his head. And there was an eye there. A second eye, below the first. And it was looking in my direction.'

He picked up his fork. He picked up his pie. He ate three bites, set the fork down, and stood up.

'I'm going home,' he said. 'I'm going to sit in my apartment, and I'm going to drink a bottle of whiskey, and I'm not go back on my beat for a week.'

'Why?'

'Because if they know I know, Vincent, then they know I know.'

ACT III - THE TRANSMISSION

I didn't sleep for four nights. I sat on the roof with a military radio I'd brought back from overseas, the kind that could reach a ship at sea or a base across the ocean. I had tuned it to frequencies I'd learned in service, frequencies that were supposed to be reserved for military and government use.

I spoke into the microphone at two in the morning, on a frequency that should have reached anyone within a hundred miles.

'This is Jack Morano, former United States Navy, calling on all frequencies. I have information of strategic importance. The building at Temple Street and Broadway is not a building. It is a spacecraft. The caretaker, Mr. Crowe, is not human. The entire block, possibly the entire district, is constructed on a vessel of unknown origin that is preparing to launch. I repeat, the building is a vessel. The people inside it are passengers, not tenants. I repeat, not tenants.'

I sent the message six times. I repeated it on seven different frequencies. I signed it with my full name and my service number and my home address, because if I was going to be considered insane, I wanted the record to show exactly who had been insane.

The response, when it came, was not from the military or the government or any agency I recognized. It was a voice, low and flat and male, speaking in a language I did not recognize. It lasted exactly twelve seconds, and when it was done, the radio went silent.

I laughed. I laughed until Evelyn found me on the roof at dawn, sitting with the radio between my knees, tears in my eyes from laughing at nothing.

'Jack,' she said. 'What are you laughing at?'

'The silence,' I said. 'The most frightening thing in the world is not what they say. It's what they don't.'

ACT IV - THE LAUNCH

They came for me at noon. Not the military, not the government. Just Delgado, standing in the doorway of our apartment, his hand resting on his service revolver, his three eyes all fixed on me.

I had forgotten I could see the third one from this angle.

'Jack,' he said. 'We need to talk.'

'Evelyn,' I said. 'Get your coat.'

Evelyn was in the kitchen, pouring water from a pitcher into a glass, her hands steady for the first time in months. She looked at Delgado, at his uniform, at the way his head tilted when he looked at me.

'Officer,' she said. 'Is everything all right?'

Delgado's three eyes blinked. All of them. Simultaneously. It was the most human thing I had ever seen him do.

'Mrs. Morano,' he said, 'everything is not all right. But it is what it is.'

The building shook then, a single deep tremor that knocked the water from Evelyn's glass and sent it spilling across the linoleum. I felt it through the floor, in my feet, in my teeth, a vibration so low it was more feeling than sound.

Delgado's head snapped toward the window. His three eyes widened.

'Street,' he said. 'Look at the street.'

I looked. The pavement was moving. Not shaking, not cracking. Moving. Upward. Slowly, steadily, like an elevator platform designed for something that weighed more than any building had a right to weigh.

The brick wall of the adjacent building rose past our window. The sidewalk below it. The lampposts, one by one, ascending in sequence, like beads on a string being pulled through the eye of a needle.

Delgado raised his revolver. He didn't aim it at me. He aimed it at the wall, at the brick, at the thing that was not a wall but a hull, and he fired three shots.

The bullets struck the brick and stopped. They didn't ricochet. They didn't penetrate. They simply stopped, suspended in the material as though it were gelatin, and then they were gone, absorbed without a mark.

'I told you,' I said.

'I told you,' Delgado said.

Evellyn took my hand. I held it. We stood in the rising building and watched through the window as the sky grew darker, not with night but with altitude, the clouds dropping away below us like a sea we were swimming above.

Delgado lowered his gun. He didn't speak. He just stood there, his three eyes fixed on the horizon that was not a horizon but the curve of the earth, and for the first time in thirty years, Mr. Crowe's creation was looking at something it had never seen before.

A sky without buildings.

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