Brick Lane Blues



The warehouse was cold in a way that had nothing to do with the weather. It was a cold that came from fluorescent lights and concrete floors and the particular kind of silence that exists only in large buildings where people are not supposed to talk to each other. Sarah Mitchell stood at her station on the packing line and watched the boxes move past her, one after another, each one identical to the last, each one containing something she would never own and would never need.



Her brother was at home. Jamie. Twenty-two, sick in a way that the doctors could name but not fix, present in the apartment most of the time but not really there — his body occupying the space where a person should be, but his attention somewhere else, somewhere further away than the walls of the flat could contain.



The shift started at six in the morning and ended at six in the evening, with thirty minutes for lunch that she spent eating a sandwich at her station because standing up for thirty minutes felt like a luxury she couldn't afford. Mr. Patterson walked the floor occasionally, his shoes making a sound that was almost a click but not quite — a soft, heavy sound, the sound of a man who had been walking floors for twenty years and had not walked far enough to matter.



"Donna's on line four," he told her on a Tuesday, which was the kind of information that felt like an instruction rather than a fact. "She's quick. Faster than you. Don't take it personal."



Sarah didn't respond. She had learned, over eight months of this job, that responding to Patterson was like talking to a wall that talked back in a voice designed to irritate. She kept her hands moving. Boxes. Tape. Label. Repeat.



Donna Harris was new — three weeks, maybe four. She was young, twenty at most, with a face that was still figuring itself out and a manner that suggested she expected people to be interested in her and was surprised when they weren't. Patterson had taken to hovering near line four, offering advice, correcting posture, smiling in a way that made the women on line four exchange glances that said everything without saying it.



"Tom," Sarah said, during the lunch period when she finally allowed herself to sit down on one of the plastic chairs in the break room. "How long has she been here?"



Tom O'Brien was sitting across from her, eating a sausage roll that he had brought from home. He was a quiet man — not shy, exactly, but deliberate in his speech, the way a person is deliberate when they have learned that most things are not worth the words they require.



"Four weeks," he said. "Line four. Packing small items. Electronics, mostly."



"Patterson's there a lot."



Tom took a bite of his sausage roll and chewed slowly. "Yeah."



"Does it bother you?"



He looked at her. His eyes were grey — a flat, steady grey, like the sky in November. "Bother me how?"



"I don't know. Does it bother you that he's— I don't know. Showing her favours?"



Tom shrugged. "Favours don't pay the rent."



"That's not an answer."



"It's the only one that matters."



She ate her sandwich in silence. It was ham and cheese on white bread, bought from the shop on the corner because the shop on the corner was cheaper than the one two streets over. She had been buying from the corner shop for eight months. She knew its prices better than she knew the prices at the supermarket.



That evening, the phone rang in the flat at seven-thirty — half an hour after her shift ended, half an hour after she had gotten home, half an hour after she had started heating a tin of soup on the stove.



"Sarah?" It was the hospital. "This is about Mr. Jamie Mitchell. We need to discuss his treatment plan."



She listened. She nodded, although they couldn't see her nod. She said yes and no and how much and when, and when she hung up, she sat at the kitchen table and looked at the wall across from her and tried to figure out if the new treatment plan was more money or less money or the same money in a different shape.



It was more money. It was always more money.



She went back to the warehouse the next morning at five-thirty, which was thirty minutes early, because she needed the extra hours and Patterson liked people who arrived early because it made him feel important.



Donna was already on the line, her hands moving fast over the boxes, her face arranged into an expression of concentration that was almost convincing. Patterson was standing behind her, saying something. She was nodding. Sarah felt something move through her — not anger, exactly. Anger required energy, and she was short on energy. This was closer to exhaustion, the kind that lived in your bones and your hands and the way your feet hurt even after you'd been standing for only six hours.



Tom arrived at six, shook out his hands, and started work on line two without saying anything to anyone. He and Sarah had developed, over eight months, a system of communication that required fewer than ten words per shift. A nod. A glance. A pause. Enough.



At eleven, during the first break, Tom sat down across from her and said, "I know a place."



"What place?"



"Not a place. A person. He works at a union office in Shadwell. He says — he says the warehouse isn't compliant with the new safety regulations. The ventilation. The line speed. If we file a complaint, they have to investigate."



Sarah looked at him. "You've been to a union office?"



"My father was in a union. He taught me how these things work." He took a sip of his tea — black, two sugars, the way he had been taking it for as long as she had known him. "You don't have to do anything. But you should know."



"Why are you telling me this?"



"Because you deserve to know."



"That's not an answer either."



Tom looked at her for a long time. The break room was full — the women from line four laughing at something, Donna in the centre of the group with that smile, Patterson standing in the doorway watching.



"Because I've watched you for eight months," he said quietly. "And you work harder than anyone on this floor. And you don't complain. And your brother is sick and you're working sixty-hour weeks and Mr. Patterson is a man who thinks the world owes him something because he's been here a long time. And none of that is fair. And I think you should know that there are things you can do."



She didn't say anything. She finished her sandwich, threw the wrapper in the bin, and went back to the line.



The complaint was filed on a Thursday. Sarah had not intended to file it. Tom had brought her a form — one page, three questions, a place to sign. She had looked at it, signed it without reading it, and handed it back. The specifics didn't matter. The fact mattered.



The investigation came two weeks later. Three men from the council arrived in the morning, clipboards in hand, and walked the floor asking questions that Patterson could not answer and the women on the floor answered for him. The line speed was excessive. The ventilation was inadequate. The restrooms were not maintained. The complaint was validated. Patterson stood on the floor and said nothing, and his silence was the loudest thing Sarah had ever heard.



Donna was gone by the end of the week. She hadn't been fired — she had simply stopped coming. The women on line four said she had found another job, or she had moved, or she had realized that Patterson's attention was not a prize but a liability. Sarah didn't know and didn't ask. She had learned, over eight months, that other people's departures were not her responsibility.



The warehouse changed — not dramatically, not immediately, but in the small ways that matter: the ventilation was improved, the line speed was reduced by fifteen percent, the restrooms were cleaned daily instead of weekly. Patterson walked the floor with a different expression on his face — not angry, exactly, but diminished. The way a man feels when he realizes that the power he thought he had was an illusion.



Tom and Sarah continued to work. They continued to communicate in glances and nods and pauses. They continued to pay for Jamie's treatment and buy ham and cheese sandwiches from the corner shop and come home at six in the evening and sit in the flat and watch the light change over the docklands.



One evening in November — a Wednesday, the kind of Wednesday that is indistinguishable from any other Wednesday except that it is colder and darker and the sky is grey from three in the afternoon — Jamie said, at the kitchen table, where he sat most evenings with a cup of tea that he did not finish:



"I'm glad you're here, Sarah."



She looked at him. He was looking at his hands, which were resting on the table, still and motionless in a way that was different from the way his hands had been resting six months ago. Six months ago, they had trembled. Now they were still.



"I'm here," she said.



"It's not much," he said. "Being here. But it's something."



She picked up his hand and held it. His fingers were thin and warm. "It's enough," she said.



And it was. Not a lot. Not the kind of enough that appears in stories with happy endings. But enough. Enough to sit at a kitchen table in a flat in the London East End and hold your brother's hand and watch the light go grey and know that tomorrow you would wake up and go to the warehouse and work and come home and sit at this table and hold his hand again.



Enough.



OTMES v2 Objective Code:

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