The Cold Draft

Tommy sat in his car outside the dealership. It was a Ford Fusion, beige, with a dent in the rear bumper that he had been meaning to fix for eight months. He did not fix it. He sat in the car and looked at the building with the blue and white sign that said KOWALSKI AUTO and thought about how his father had named it after himself and how Tommy had never once told anyone he knew his father.

The building was on Seven Mile Road, next to a shuttered gas station and a Chinese restaurant that had closed in the spring. The parking lot had three customer cars and twelve trade-ins. The trade-ins were all older models with cracked windshields and seats that had seen better decades.

Inside, Denise Moreau was on the assembly line at Delphi. She had been there for four years. She punched in at six and punched out at two-thirty. She ate a peanut butter sandwich in the break room at eleven. She went back to the line and tightened bolts on transmission housings. She did this eight hours a day, five days a week, for forty weeks a year. The rest of the time she went to a studio apartment on Grand River that had a window that did not close and a radiator that hissed and a refrigerator that made a sound like a dying animal.

They met at a Circle K on Outer Drive at eleven at night. Tommy was buying coffee and a pack of gum. Denise was buying the same brand of coffee and the same pack of gum. They reached for the same coffee at the same time. Their hands touched. She said excuse me. He said sorry. They both grabbed their coffee and stood at the counter waiting to pay, and Tommy noticed that Denise was reading a book of Mary Oliver poems, and Denise noticed that Tommy was reading the same book.

"Where did you get that?" he asked.

"Goodwill on Seven Mile," Denise said. "Three dollars."

"Same place," Tommy said.

They paid. They stood in the parking lot drinking coffee. Denise was wearing a denim jacket over a gray sweatshirt. Her hair was pulled back in a clip. She looked like a woman who had something to do the next morning and was making the most of the few hours she had tonight.

"I like this book," Tommy said.

"Me too," Denise said. "She writes about normal stuff. Trees and water and birds. But she writes about them like they're people."

"My mom used to read poetry," Tommy said. Then he stopped, because that sounded like something you weren't supposed to say, like you were performing a softness that wasn't yours.

But Denise didn't think that. She said, "My dad read poetry too. Before he stopped. He stopped when I was ten. I found a book in his closet with poems in it. I read them sometimes. But I can't find the book anymore."

They talked for two hours. When Tommy drove home at one in the morning, the house was dark, his mother asleep, his father's study still lit with the lamp that had been on when Tommy left that morning, and Tommy thought about how his father never turned off anything.

They dated for three months. They went to diners. They drove along the river. They sat on the hood of Tommy's car and watched the bridge lights. Denise brought her notebook. She wrote in it sometimes when they sat together. Tommy never asked what she was writing. He could tell by the way she held the pen, pressed down hard like she was trying to push the words through the paper, that it was important.

In December, Tommy's father called him into the office. Frank Kowalski was a man who measured everything in dollars and square feet. He sat behind his desk and looked at Tommy the way a man looks at a tool he expected to work.

"Patricia Bellamy wants to marry you," he said.

Tommy said nothing.

"Her father owns three dealerships in Ann Arbor. He's putting up half the capital for the new lot on 8 Mile. You marry Patricia, you get half. You don't, you get what you have."

"What I have?"

"What you have is a Ford Fusion with a dent in the bumper and a dealership that's breaking even."

Tommy drove home in silence. He sat in the car outside his apartment for a long time. Denise's building was across the street. He could see her window. The light was on. He watched it for a while. Then he went inside.

In January, Denise's asthma got worse. She missed three days of work. Her doctor at the community clinic said she needed an inhaler, a prescription one, not the over-the-counter kind. The prescription was sixty-eight dollars a month. Denise made twelve dollars an hour. She calculated, on the back of an envelope, that the inhaler would cost her almost half a week's pay.

She told Tommy at a diner on Woodward. She was eating pancakes. She didn't seem worried.

"I'm fine," she said. "It's just the cold. When spring comes, it'll get better."

"It won't," Tommy said.

"It will. I'm fine."

He didn't tell his father. He told himself it wasn't his father's problem. He told himself a lot of things.

Denise missed five more days. She came to work coughing. Her supervisor told her to take a sick day. She took a sick day. She didn't get paid for it. She sat in her apartment with the radiator hissing and the window open because the air felt better with the cold in it, and she read Mary Oliver and wrote in her notebook.

She died in March. It was a Wednesday. The ambulance came at four in the morning. The EMT said it was an asthma attack. He said it quickly, the way you say something that has happened too many times.

Tommy found the notebook in a trash can behind the dealership. He doesn't know how it got there. He doesn't know why she threw it away. He doesn't know why he didn't look at it sooner. He opened it on the last page. She had been writing something. The words were small at the end, the handwriting shaky. Below the words was a drawing: a line of prescription bottles, each one labeled with a name she couldn't afford.

He stood in the parking lot behind the dealership and held the notebook in his hands and felt the cold draft come through the chain-link fence and wrap around him like something alive. He didn't cry. He stood there holding a dead woman's notebook in the cold until the sun came up and the lot was full of trade-ins and no one looked at him.

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Objective Tensor: [M1:3.0, M4:2.0, M3:4.0, N1:0.15, N2:0.85, K1:0.90, K2:0.10]
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Similarity to Source: 0.30
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